Autumn Poem
By Brendon
Leaves slowly drifting to the ground
Descending
Ants collecting food
To survive winter
Leaves all shapes and sizes
Warm sun reflecting on the trees
Leaves slowly getting crunched beneath
my feet
Fresh smell in the Autumn air
Birds tweeting in the naked trees
A leaf tornado spinning out of control
Like a fire out of control.
WOW!!!!!!!!!! brendon! YOUR!!!! Poem!!!!!!!!! Is!!!!!!!!! GOOD!
ReplyDeleteGood job Brendon. I liked how you use like a fire out of control.What did
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Wow Brendon your poem is great! I love the photo, it's cool!
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Good job Brendon.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because you said"like a tornado spinning out of control.
WOW Brendon I LIKE YOUR POEM BECAUSE YOU PUT OUT OF CONTROL!
ReplyDeleteBrendon Your Poem looks amazing.Keep up the hard Work.
ReplyDeleteBrendon I like it how you wrote Like a fire out of control.
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