Autumn
Fiery red leaves
Twirling down to the ground
Like graceful ballerinas dancing
Feeling the red orange yellow
Leaves crush beneath my feet
That lovely Autumn breeze
Rushing through my hair
Like the wind rushing past me
In an EXCITING running race
Hedgehogs as spiky as prickles
Getting ready for the long Winter's hibernation
Evergreen trees sitting there
Clueless as to why all the deciduous trees are losing all their
pretty coloured leaves
By Olivia
WOW Olivia! I really liked your poem.My favourite part was when you said Hedgehogs as spiky as prickles still I liked the rest. GOOD JOB!
ReplyDeleteWOW OLIVIA! Your poem is great. I think it's got lots of good words in it.
ReplyDeleteDo you think her poem has lots of good words in it?
Nice job Olivla. Your poem is very colourful. Do you think Olivla's poem is colourful?
ReplyDeleteYes Stella. I agree Olivla's poem is colourful.
DeleteHi Tait
ReplyDeleteYes I agree Olivia's poem has very good words in it! I also think that she put good similes in it! Like "Hedgehogs as spiky as a prickle". GOOD JOB!
WOW Olivia YOUR POEM IS really COOL well Done
ReplyDeleteWOW Olivia Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the word "Deciduous" It made your poem very interesting! Well done. I also liked that you put the sentence "Fiery red leaves twirling down to the ground like Graceful Ballerinas dancing!" and you put EXCITING in it that did make it EXCITING! well done.
good job Olivia
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, because it has some good sentences for example "leaves crush beneath my feet" Well done!
WOW Olivia I Like Your Poem SO Much Because you Put The Word Deciduous!.
ReplyDeleteWell Done Olivia. Your poem looks amazing,keep up all your hard work.
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