Welcome to Room 18's blog for 2017. We are an enthusiastic Year 3 and 4 class and our teacher is Mrs Morris. We are looking forward to working together and learning lots of exciting and new things this year! Check our blog regularly to see what we have been up to. We would love to read your comments.
Wow Jordyn. Your Autumn poem is VERY colourful and VERY bright!
ReplyDeleteDo you think that Jordyn's poem is VERY colourful and VERY bright?
Yes Tait, I agree! I like how Jordyn used objects with colours for example: Yellow like the sun.
DeleteI really like your poem Jordyn very colourful. I like the simile 'as orange as a pumpkin'!��
ReplyDeleteHi Jordyn, I like the way you used red wine in your poem. Do you like how Jordyn used red wine in her poem?
ReplyDeleteWOW! Jordyn! Your Poem Is Good
ReplyDeleteWOW! Jordyn Your poem stand's out peftly JORDYN
ReplyDeleteWELL DONE! YOU Deserve it
Wow Jordyn great poem, I loved how you put "leaves red as wine" did you think that that was cleaver?
ReplyDeleteI liked how I said yellow brighter then the sun
ReplyDeleteWOW Jordyn I Like Your Poem Because You put brighter sun! Well Done!
ReplyDeleteWell done Jordyn! I like how you only you put in red like red wine.
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Well done Jordyn your poem looks amazing with the good effort you have done.Keep Up the Good Effort.
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