Autumn Fun
Bees disappearing as the flowers close
Amazing clouds, fun to watch
Grass as wet as a grumpy old clouds
Autumn wind swishing past my face
Animals hibernating in leaves as cripsy as apples
Getting darker faster like the wind
Getting colder, wearing beanies, standing by the heater
By Emma
Well done Emma! Your poem is wonderful , I love it.
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Good job Emma!I like your descriptive words.Tait I agree with you, Emma's poem is good one.Which describing word do you like in Emma's poem?
DeleteI like how you used similies in your poem. My favourite similie was "as a grumpy old clouds." What was your favourite similie?
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB EMMA I Love Your Autumn Poem
ReplyDeleteWOW! Emma,what an amazing poem.I like that in your poem you added the word "beanies" in there because you actually start wearing beanies in Autumn. GOOD JOB!
ReplyDeleteEMMA Your Autumn poem is SO FUNNY! Because YOU Said As A Grumpy Old Cloud
ReplyDeleteVERY FUNNY! Hey Emma What Do You Think About Emma's poem
Nicole I LOVE that simile "as a grumpy old clouds." That is a great simile Emma.Great job Emma. What is your favourite simile?
ReplyDeleteWell down Emma, I loved your poem I liked how you used the sentince "bees disappearing as flowers close" it was really cool!
ReplyDeleteWOW Emma I just thought of something! I loved when you used the "beanies" because it is SO COLD! Do you think that, that was a good word?
ReplyDeleteEmma I like how you said Bees disappearing as the flowers close.
ReplyDeleteGood job Emma,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the word "hibernating" it made me really want to read your poem. I also like how you used the sentence "grumpy old clouds fun to watch" that was clever, but why would you want to watch a grumpy old cloud?
Well Done Emma and Keep the hard work up.
ReplyDeleteGood work Emma!.I absolutely love that simile of yours. Great descriptive writing keep it up!.
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