Monday 15 May 2017

Brendon's Autumn Poem


Autumn Poem
By Brendon

Leaves slowly drifting to the ground
Descending

Ants collecting food
To survive winter

Leaves all shapes and sizes
Warm sun reflecting on the trees

Leaves slowly getting crunched beneath
my feet
File:Autumn reflection in Kastoria lake, Greece.jpg - Wikimedia ...Fresh smell in the Autumn air

Birds tweeting in the naked trees
A leaf tornado spinning out of control

Like a fire out of control.

7 comments:

  1. WOW!!!!!!!!!! brendon! YOUR!!!! Poem!!!!!!!!! Is!!!!!!!!! GOOD!

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  2. Good job Brendon. I liked how you use like a fire out of control.What did
    you like about Brendon poem?

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  3. Wow Brendon your poem is great! I love the photo, it's cool!
    Who else thinks the photo is cool?

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  4. Good job Brendon.
    I like your poem because you said"like a tornado spinning out of control.

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  5. WOW Brendon I LIKE YOUR POEM BECAUSE YOU PUT OUT OF CONTROL!

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  6. Brendon Your Poem looks amazing.Keep up the hard Work.

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  7. Brendon I like it how you wrote Like a fire out of control.

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