Sunday 14 May 2017

Liam's Autumn Poem

Autumn Time
By Liam

Red, orange, yellow, colourful Leaves everywhere
Soft breeze in the invisible air
Leaves twirling swirling down from the beautiful tree. Cherry red leaves, fanta orange leaves, lemon yellow leaves
Trees naked after leaves falling down
A great new season...Autumn

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4 comments:

  1. Well done Liam, Your Autumn poem is really good. I like how you did "cherry red leaves, fanta orange leaves, lemon yellow leaves".
    Who else likes it?

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  2. I had so much fun writing my poem! It was fun choosing the picture and writing red cherry leaves, fanta orange leaves and lemon yellow leaves. What was your favourite part?

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  3. WOW! Good! Poem! Liam! I liked when you put cherry red leaves, lemon yellow leaves and fanta orange leaves! What Is Your Favourite part?

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  4. Liam I like how you use cherry red leaves,lemon yellow leaves and fanta
    orange leaves.What do you like about Liam poem

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